Oh, Ange. I've neglected you. I should have revised your sections first, before I revised anything. But now I've gotten warm and cozy with you, and everything in Book 1 is now in hand. Not only did I add a new section here you have a fight with your sister Nellwyn (as sisters do), but you also have a new encounter with Caius, which helps substantiate your whole relationship with him. All of this means you're a real character, going through a real arc. The book is the stronger for it.
So another read-through, and I'll start examining another character. I'm quite pleased at this point, especially as revising Ange's section affected all the others -- in a good way. I had to look at scenes involving all the other major characters.
So yes, progress is being made. I hope to have a working copy in August to give to my satellite readers. Then I'll be querying again in the Fall!
~X
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